speech examination

Assalamu’alaikum wr.wb.
All praises be to Allah, the God who chose Muhammad as the chosen prophet from adam’s descendants. He sent Muhammad to give a good news and warning to all mankind with his permission, he asked all people to allah. He is the lamp that brigtens the ways. I bear witness that there is no god but Allah, and I bear witness that muhammad is his messenger. May Allah bless our leader Muhammad, along with his companions and his foolowers until the end of the world.

Dear brother and sister.
In general, the most popular language is english. English is an international language. There are many language in the world where english is the feremost of them all. It is understood and spoken almost everywhere in the world. English has become the key instrument of globalization.
We are living in a fast changing world, or you can call it a global village. Can you image that the people in a small village cannot understood each other? Messages can go anywhere in the world in a few minutes, people can travel anywhere you like by a fast airplane, merchandise moves more freely all over the world, so. You see, people need to contact with each other, we need an international language and english is becoming one of our best choices, because most of knowledge are issued in english.
Dear brother and sister.
English is the main language for bussiness and commerce , about the last 300 years the top (or one of top) nations has been an english-speaking nation. In short, English has become a global language. The definition of a global language is a language which has been given a specefic place within countries and communities around the world, even in places where there are very few native speakers of this language.
Therefore we as the young generation , have to learn english language and can applying it in daily life.
Wassalamu’alaikum wr.wb.